Luke Parker Son of Athena

Hi, Jacob! I'm Kat, one of the admins.

I guess you haven't read the message sent to your pm box about creating characters.
Please note that you have to follow the format here:
https://campsfordemigods.rpg-board.net/t262-profile-of-your-character

Don't hesitate and ask me in the chatroom or via pm message if you've got any question.

You might want to add more to your biography... Like 1 paragraph. Tell your relationship with your family, who is your girlfriend... Your journey to Camp.

Also, you have to choose one camp  

If you wanna be like Nico, who is at both camps, I will have to discuss it to Katelyn (aka ChocoKat)

how can i be at both camps

Alright first off, don't double post. Click the edit button 'edit'  under the long black bar.

Nice try, though there're something that you have to pay attention to about your character Luke:

1. Luke can't be a son of athena while being the legacy of three other gods at one time. If you like all the four gods and goddess chosen, create different characters.

2. Is he in Camp Half Blood or Camp Jupiter? Pick one only.

3. It'd be much better if you elaborate more on Luke's personality, merits and demerits. If you're not sure how to do, you can refer to the approved characters listed in this link:
https://campsfordemigods.rpg-board.net/f11-approved-characters

4. 'Relationship with others' refers to how well does Luke get along with the others which include his parents, siblings, mortal friends, etc.. before and after going to camp.

5. 'Very wise' can be a strength but not a power. If Luke doesn't have one, you can simply put down 'none'.

6. What is 'charm playing clue' ?

7. Spiders can be a fear, but not a fatal flaw unless his fear towards spiders are so intense that this could actually lead to his breakdown and death.

8. How humble Luke is that leads to his downfall in battles?

9. How's his weapon using skills?

10. Write more for his biography. You may include general information of the character, relationship with the others, something about his/her family members, how he/she arrive at camp, etc.

I strongly advise you to have a look of the approved characters to see what has to be included.
Anyway, break your leg in writing:) If you have any question, feel free to ask me or Lee



Katrina (my character) is looking forward to having a new roommate in CHB xdd 

so what do you think now

I see you've made some changes to your biography. It'd be better if you could elaborate more on how was his life like before going to camp, how did he end up at camp, etc.. 

For the rest of the profile, please refer to my previous post above

Don't forget to fix orthographic errors...

ok what do i need to fix

LeeUnderwood wrote:

Don't forget to fix orthographic errors...

what does this mean

Lee is suggesting that you have to be more aware of the language and grammar used.

it makes sense what do you think

lee dont mean to be rude i want a camp half blood offical to see this not a jupiter

Jacob, I'm an admin. It doesn't matter if your a greek or roman... And I'm only helping you. If you see, I haven't even told you something to fix about information, etc. Only grammar. You don't have to be greek or roman to have good grammar. Nor I have to be greek or roman to reply an app, after all, Im an admin. But if you feel better by Kat checking the app, then ok. But remember the grammar.

just remember you talking to a autistic case

Jacob, did you finish fixing?

yes i did lee

About the tattoo, at what part of the body is it? 

Add more at personality... I mean, "Autistic" isn't a personality. Autistic people are normal people and have their own personalities as well

At weaknesses, none of them are. 

About the grammar thing, Im going to give you an example, ok?


I was born in Astoria, NY at 7:00. Six years later , I kept dreaming of my mother. I asked my dad who was Athena and he said: "Luke that is your Mother". Every night after, she kept saying: "Luke, I am your Mother". In 6th grade, we found out I had Aspergers syndrome and eerie, since I cannot get along with my parents. With me going to camp I won’t see Rebecca, my girlfriend, that much. I got to camp while I was on a camping trip with my family and Rebecca's family. Her Brother Jake, was showing me the forest. There was a camp. He said this is Camp Half Blood. Then he said: "I know you are son of Athena'' and I replied,  "how do you a son of Athena".  He said "I am a Son of Dionysus and so is Rebecca". We will bring you to Camp Half Blood. Rebecca and I got to know each other a lot better. One time in training, I was looked down, then he defeated me. Then another day I went against the same guy. I would see the fight in my head before it happened, then I realised I got a gift to see in the future from my Mother.


This: , : . ; ." )  symbols are very important, don't forget them ;D 

Lee i understand now And the tattoo was of his mother

Ok, but at what part of the body is the tattoo located?

All Chocokat and I have told you to edit, you can do it by pressing the 'edit' bottom... ok?

You didn't fix the 'Personality' btw...

ok lee

Jacob, you can look up in some applications examples about personalities... they can't just be a word. Sentences...